I'm all that I have...All that I lost...

Hey guys,

Been meaning to do this for a while now....nonetheless...here it goes...
All That I have All that I lost.wma

I personally like the transition at 6:15...(reminds you of something??)...all of it has been played ...no production/TRITON escapism...and best (read worst) of all "TAKE 1"...but this is the idea and mood for the song.....I would really like it if someone can please fit in the lyrics/phrases to the song (my mind is now saturated)...I would like not to change the words...(the mood has been set and there is no going back on that)...minor alterations to sequences/progresions would be my choice...but if the idea is bigger than the mood itself I am more than willing. Again please excuse me for, it is take 1 (and zero mixing and no bass)......we can get more polished than that ...here are the lyrics...

I looked away just a while
And you were miles gone
When you left my side?
I cannot recall
I don’t know at all

I’m all that I have
I’m all that I lost

It has been so very long
Ghosts of your memories
Crush my soul
The claws of our sweet past
Gnaw at my bones
I reach out to you deep in my sleep
There is cold death beneath

I’m all that I have
I’m all that I lost

I wake up choking on my own breath
What a farce my life seems
Is it only I who bleeds
Or we have both ceased to be

But if I ever see you again
I will look away
Tears will well
But I know I will walk away

I’m all that I have
I’m all that I lost

Comments/Suggestions are most welcome...

Thanks,
LighthouseKeeper......